October Girl

This was actually very good, but I'm not going to go over what I liked, because it seems like everyone else has already done that *pats on the back* nice ...

For some reason the title dragged me in and then when I actually read the beginning it was OK but it wasn't something that begged for my attention. I don't ...

Robyn We both glared. "Be happy that I can't blow you to hell right now." The future me glared. "Not happy, blessed." He grinned. "But what ae we suppose to ...

Robyn "You can't kill her honey, you can only banish her." I said sadly. When we looked up there we were again The future me was pacing back and fourth ...

Robyn I stood close next to Alex. "Well we started putting away your wedding presants and well we found a sword. Robyn, I think it was the sword you were ...

Well then..... I liked it :)

[quote="Dark Star"][i]im not sure id i got this in the right catagory but w/e[/i] Black Hearts, Dark Shadows Evil lurks Hairs on end Temptation smirks Courage pretends>>I liked how you ...

yes :) that would be wise

Robyn I pulled my tanktop over my head nad yanked on some jeans. I started gathering our things. "No we'll come back for them." He took my hand. "Are you ...

Robyn "That was the most cutest, sweetest, lovelyest evening of my entire life." Then my cell phone rang..... "And now it's over." I said. "This is your father this time ...

Robyn I felt strong arms around my body. "Oh.... God." I said. "Hmm?" The voice said. "I'm dead huh?" I asked, and then started laughing. "What makes you say that?" ...

Robyn I giggled for the longest time, even when his mouth was away from my neck I still felt butterflies and they'd never felt so good, so beautiful. I looked ...

Robyn "You mother, really know's how to.... treat a girl huh?" I smiled. "That she does, but then again she doesn't have a daughter. She thinks of you as one." ...

banned for living in fantasy ooh burrrn

hehe 10/10